Monday, November 01, 2010

Fair Dinkum Haiku 01: Bass.

Night was filled with sound.
Like a mighty thumping Bass.
That climbs and tumbles.

(c) 2010 Windsmoke.

5 comments:

The lady in Red said...

Thumping poem....nice post!

Best wishes,
Rosana

Ann, Chen Jie Xue 陈洁雪 said...

G'Day,

Sorry about your Mum, how old was she. Hope she didn't suffer too much.

My mum was 60 when she met with an accident between Toowomba and Ipwish. It was very hard for everyone. When dad died at 84, we sang praises that he had gone home to be with your mum.

It is naturally for you to feel upset, as all separation is painful.

Dave King said...

Very good. Enjoyed this one.

LifeRamblings said...

a short and sweet poem. Have a nice day.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day, THE LADY IN RED, DAVE KING & LIFE RAMBLINGS, I'm glad you all enjoyed it as i hoped someone would. There will be somemore in the future so stay tuned.

G' Day ANN, Check you last post for an answer.