Wednesday, October 17, 2012

True Blue Haiku: Goodbye.

Each day of sorrow
Bears me closer to Goodbye
I'll lay down and die.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

20 comments:

Kath Lockett said...

Crikey!

Either this is a really, really good Haiku or you're trying to tell us something....?

Andrew said...

I feel a little alarmed but I am sure I shouldn't be.

River said...

I'm also a little concerned. Are you okay? Written in full because it is not RUOK day.

FruitCake said...

I've decided to put a good spin on this: It's only sorrow that ages us.

Ygraine said...

Sending you lots and lots of happy thoughts Windsmoke.
Please don't lay down and die. We'd miss you so...:(

Joanne Noragon said...

Dear Windsmoke, you are, of course, sitting on the dunny pondering life and some more zingers. We're waiting to hear...

Lynn Proctor said...

i hope this isn't extremely personal!

Beach Bum said...

What's up Wind? You okay?

Cloudia said...

but not for a loooong time!



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The Elephant's Child said...

Each moment of joy does as well. Please reassure us? Pretty please.

Annmarie Pipa said...

oh no, don't give up.
believe.

PerthDailyPhoto said...

Don't leave us hanging Windsmoke!! Poignant and slightly worrying..

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day KATH: I reckon its a really good True Blue Haiku to!.

G' Day ANDREW: You are right you shouldn't be alarmed.

G' Day RIVER, LYNN, BEACH BUM, THE ELEPHANTS CHILD, ANNMARIE & GRACE: I'm fine because this True Blue Haiku just popped into my Bizarre mind a few days ago.

G' Day FRUIT CAKE: You're spot on.

G' Day YGRAINE: Thanks for the happy thoughts and i'm still gunna be around for a while yet.

G' Day JOANNE: More zingers are on the way.

G' Day CLOUDIA: I've still got a lot of living to do that is for sure.

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malcfifty said...

Good poem, Windsmoke, though it is understandable some might be concerned if the author is speaking of present personal circumstances. I am confident this is not the case. As we grow older, we realise that no matter how bad today may have been, the sun will rise tomorrow. What did Scarlett O'Hara (Vivien Leigh) say at the end of "Gone with the Wind" - "Tara! Home. I'll go home. And I'll think of some way to get him back. After all... tomorrow is another day."

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day TRAFFIC: Welcome to Bizarre Scribble and i hope to hear from you in the future.

G' Day MAL: I'm fine because i've still gotta lot of living to do and many sunrises to greet.

malcfifty said...

:) Good to hear, Windsmoke!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day MAL: Thanks.

Red Nomad OZ said...

I'm glad I saw this post AFTER I'd seen that you'd posted two newer ones, or I'd have REALLY been worried!!!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RED: I'm gonna be around for a long time yet that is for sure.