Humour, Poems and Yarns from the Pen of a Complete Novice.
Very vivid imagery! Well done!
plumb perfect! Aloha to YOU from HonoluluComfort Spiral ~ > < } } ( ° >> < 3 3 3 ( ' >
love your haiku. totally reflects my mood today!
Wow, the entire lifecycle of an apple in three little lines.THAT is brilliant!I watched them form, grow, then fall :)
I hardly started reading your blue haiku but in no time i finished reading it.Apple tree gives us apples to enhance our immunity; helps us to stay away from the doctor resulting in our life longevity but its own life is so short. What a sacrifice?
Its an inevitable fact, this will happen..nicely worded here Windsmoke
P.s. Ellie May you say Windsmoke, I'm sure there were a couple of good reasons for this haha!
What goes up must come down
G' Day BEACH BUM, CLOUDIA, GRACE & ANNMARIE: I'm glad you all enjoyed it thanks for saying so, its much appreicated indeed.G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: A happy mood i hope.G' Day YGRAINE: Thank you and you're spot on about the lifecycle.G' Day TARIQ: All varieties of apples are my favourite fruit. As the saying goes down here in OZ "An apple a day keeps the doctor away".G' Day GRACE: Absolutely especially when testosterone comes into play.G' Day BANANAZ: Fair enough.
I had a comment, but my computer froze when I clicked publish, then I forgot to come back later.
G' Day RIVER: I reckon that has happened to all of us at one time or another.
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