Wednesday, November 28, 2012

True Blue Haiku: Mature.

Apple tree in bud
Fully Mature red apples
Plummet to the ground.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

12 comments:

Beach Bum said...

Very vivid imagery! Well done!

Cloudia said...

plumb perfect!



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LifeRamblings said...

love your haiku. totally reflects my mood today!

Ygraine said...

Wow, the entire lifecycle of an apple in three little lines.
THAT is brilliant!
I watched them form, grow, then fall :)

TariqMian said...

I hardly started reading your blue haiku but in no time i finished reading it.
Apple tree gives us apples to enhance our immunity; helps us to stay away from the doctor resulting in our life longevity but its own life is so short. What a sacrifice?

PerthDailyPhoto said...

Its an inevitable fact, this will happen..nicely worded here Windsmoke

PerthDailyPhoto said...

P.s. Ellie May you say Windsmoke, I'm sure there were a couple of good reasons for this haha!

Annmarie Pipa said...

lovely!

Bananazą®‡ said...

What goes up must come down

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day BEACH BUM, CLOUDIA, GRACE & ANNMARIE: I'm glad you all enjoyed it thanks for saying so, its much appreicated indeed.

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: A happy mood i hope.

G' Day YGRAINE: Thank you and you're spot on about the lifecycle.

G' Day TARIQ: All varieties of apples are my favourite fruit. As the saying goes down here in OZ "An apple a day keeps the doctor away".

G' Day GRACE: Absolutely especially when testosterone comes into play.

G' Day BANANAZ: Fair enough.

River said...

I had a comment, but my computer froze when I clicked publish, then I forgot to come back later.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RIVER: I reckon that has happened to all of us at one time or another.