Wednesday, November 07, 2012

True Blue Haiku: Mad.

City of Mad souls.
Pass through the rivers of light.
Into the blackness.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

14 comments:

Andrew said...

An opinion on cup goers?

FruitCake said...

Windsmoke: This is one of your best. Thank You.

Cloudia said...

Thither they go!


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The Elephant's Child said...

And don't we all take that route some days...

River said...

Mad souls passing into the blackness; I wonder, do any of them ever find their way back into the light? I hope so.

Beach Bum said...

Sounds like Republicans here in the States.

ANITA said...

good poem!!

Red Nomad OZ said...

Wonderful! Sounds like the prologue to a futuristic post-apocalypse!!

Agree with FruitCake entirely!

Ygraine said...

Route of the manic depressive, I think. Been there many times! Hehehe :D

PerthDailyPhoto said...

I'll third that with FC and Red, really deep Windsmoke, it also has me a little worried now!!

Lynn Proctor said...

oh this is one of the best yet--i can see them, even in the darkness!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day ANDREW: Could be.

G' Day FRUIT CAKE, ANITA, RED, & LYNN: I'm glad you all liked it.

G' Day CLOUDIA: Absolutely.

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: We certainly do.

G' Day RIVER: Nope, its their final journey.

G' Day BEACH BUM: I'd say it'll take a while for 'em to bounce back.

G' Day YGRAINE: I'm not sure if i've been down that route.

G' Day GRACE: Don't be worried, be happy.

malcfifty said...

You certainly have a gift, Windsmoke, to be able to express such profound messages in so few words. Cheers, Mal.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day MAL: Thanks for saying so its most encouraging indeed.