Monday, November 15, 2010

Fair Dinkum Haiku 02: Flame.


Vibrant candle Flame.
Scatters darken shadows on the walls.
Melting wax coursing.

(c) 2010 Windsmoke.

7 comments:

Lyn said...

I can really see this one..very clearly..lovely...

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LYN, Thank you for your lovely comment as this is my second attempt at a Haiku i wasn't really confident it would be alright.

Dave King said...

Unusual and satisfying.

Life Ramblings said...

i can feel the flame that's burning. :)

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day, DAVE KING & LIFE RAMBLINGS, thank you for your kind comments, i'm still trying to write more Haiku so the more feedback i get the better.

Katherine said...

Such poetic simplicity. Lovely!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day KATHERINE, Welcome to my humble blog and i hope to hear from you in the future. Thank you foryour lovely comment.