Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Fair Dinkum Haiku 06: Hurricane.


Rolling waves crashing.
Ferocious Hurricane blows.
Silence gripped by eye.

(c) 2010 Windsmoke.

12 comments:

Elisabeth said...

A storm 'in the eye', Windsmoke. Terrific haiku. Thanks.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day ELISABETH, I'm glad you found this Haiku terrific as i'm still learning how to write Haiku so any feedback helps.

Pearl said...

Oh, I like this.

(Enjoyed your "braised tomato" joke earlier, as well.)

Pearl

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day PEARL, Welcome to my humble blog and hope to hear from you in the future. I'm glad you enjoyed the joke there's more to come later.

Lyn said...

Always wondered what it was like in the "eye"..very good haiku!

Cloudia said...

Excellent!





Aloha from Hawaii

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Windsmoke. said...

G' day LYN, That's pretty close to what it's like in the eye. Thank you for comment i'm still learning to write Haiku it's challenging at times so the more positive feedback i get the better.

G' Day CLOUDIA, Always good to hear from you and thank you for the positive feedback it helps.

Ann said...

Let them bring rain to stop bush fire.

Today, we are back to wearing jackets, and we are going to have 4 days of rain. The farmers who are drought stricken will be happy.

Dave King said...

Like it. Like it very much.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day ANN, We also are in for wet weather for next 3 days. Farmers here want the rain to stop for a little while because it's causing to many floods and ruining their crops.

G' Day DAVE KING, I'm glad you liked it very much because the more positive feedback i get the better.

Life Ramblings said...

awesome. you're one of the best Haiku writers.

Windsmoke. said...

G Day LIFE RAMBLINGS, Thank you for your generous commen, i still consider myself a novice.