Saturday, July 02, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 035: Redemption.

Nothing carved in stone.
For the wicked to absolve.
Like no Redemption.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.

5 comments:

Beach Bum said...

This was a great piece of writing. I somehow came away again thinking about idiotic American politicians.

Mags118 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
Very well done. Reminds me of the crap we are going through with our politicians here in OZ. :)

Life Ramblings said...

no offence but i think this is one of your most difficult haiku to comment on.

Red Nomad OZ said...

Yep, this one did my head in!! But that's not necessarily a bad thing ...

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day BEACH BUM & MAGS118: Politicians around the world are all the same tarred with the same brush :-).

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: If you feel uncomfortable about making a comment it won't offend me, its not a problem, no worries. Instead join me on Monday for Random Humour For Grown Ups, see ya then :-).

G' Day RED NOMAD OZ: Its not a bad thing if makes you sit up and think about it. It was not my intention to do in anybodies head though, i just wrote it as i seen it :-).