Saturday, July 23, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 041: Breakwater.

In Breakwater lights.
Rippling surface water.
Through hazy raw sleet.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.

9 comments:

Beach Bum said...

Great writing, would love to be in such a place right now. Its crazy hot up here.

The Elephant's Child said...

Another nice one. Thanks.

Cloudia said...

well done!


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Life Ramblings said...

this is wonderful. happy weekend.

River said...

I like lights on water.

Dave King said...

This one ticks all the boxes. Like it very much.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day BEACH BUM: Its crazy freezing down here in OZ, wanna swap? :-).

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Your welcome :-).

G' Day CLOUDIA: Thank you :-).

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Happy weekend right back at ya :-).

G' Day RIVER: I reckon the lights have a calming effect reflecting off the water :-).

G' Day DAVE KING: Thank you very much for your generous yarn :-).

Red Nomad OZ said...

Love the punchline - so unexpected after the tranquility of the first two lines ... unless I've completely misinterpreted what you've said!!!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RED NOMAD OZ: You are spot on :-).