Humour, Poems and Yarns from the Pen of a Complete Novice.
Great writing, would love to be in such a place right now. Its crazy hot up here.
Another nice one. Thanks.
well done!Aloha from Waikiki;Comfort Spiral ><}}(°> > < } } ( ° >< ° ) } } > <
this is wonderful. happy weekend.
I like lights on water.
This one ticks all the boxes. Like it very much.
G' Day BEACH BUM: Its crazy freezing down here in OZ, wanna swap? :-).G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Your welcome :-).G' Day CLOUDIA: Thank you :-).G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Happy weekend right back at ya :-).G' Day RIVER: I reckon the lights have a calming effect reflecting off the water :-).G' Day DAVE KING: Thank you very much for your generous yarn :-).
Love the punchline - so unexpected after the tranquility of the first two lines ... unless I've completely misinterpreted what you've said!!!
G' Day RED NOMAD OZ: You are spot on :-).
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