Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 046: Beams.


Beams in the window.
Tiny slivers to the sky.
Stairway to darkness.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.
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12 comments:

The Elephant's Child said...

Love it. One of your best. Thanks.

Elliot MacLeod-Michael said...

Nice, one of the better haikus I've seen recently.
+followed

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: I'm glad you think so, thank you :-).

G' Day ELLIOT: Welcome to my humble blog and i hope to hear from you in the future, thanks for the fantastic yarn. + followed to :-).

Dave King said...

Clever. Like it. A cracker!

River said...

I like this one.

Beach Bum said...

One of the best ever!

Balimoz said...

wonderful...this is my fav

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day DAVE KING, RIVER & BEACH BUM: I'm so glad you like this Haiku thank you all :-).

G' Day BALIMOZ: Welcome to my humble blog and hope to hear from you in the future. Thank you for your generous yarn and i will put your blog on my list of followers :-).

Life Ramblings said...

i couldn't agree more with the others. very well presented haiku.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thank you :-).

Mags118 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
This is very nice, reminds me of the stars at night. :)

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day MAGS: Absolutely :-).