Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 058: Naked.


Riotous Naked flame.
Frolicing on pitch soaked torch.
Sparkling dank dungeon.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.

5 comments:

The Elephant's Child said...

And that flame was probably scary rather than welcome to the inhabitants of the dungeon. Thanks for this. Got me thinking already.

Beach Bum said...

Spooky and scary stuff!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Thinking will take away the pain :-).

G' Day BEACH BUM: Especially if you're afraid of the dark :-).

Life Ramblings said...

this is powerful and thought-provoking.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thank you :-).