Saturday, September 24, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 059: Terrain.


Satanic clouds burst.
Vicious rain plunges headlong.
Onto shorn Terrain.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.

8 comments:

Cloudia said...

I can hear the monsoon rains!


Aloha from Waikiki;

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Beach Bum said...

Finally getting some rain here, but my lawn is dead so big deal.

Great writing!

The Elephant's Child said...

And I would really like some rain here - perhaps not that heavy though.
Thanks.

Mags118 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
Some rain would be nice, but light showers is all we need. :)

Bananazą®‡ said...

CCR could be singing ~

♫Have you ever seen the rain
Comin' down onto shorn Terrain?♫

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day CLOUDIA: You should be very safe from monsoon rains in your new digs :-).

G' Day BEACH BUM: After a few weeks of rain your lawn will grow back and then you'll have to mow it :-).

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD & MAGS: Sadly the rain has come and gone, we can now look forward to a very dry summer :-).

G' Day BANANAZ: Your little poem is very clever, well done :-).

Life Ramblings said...

I like the sound of the winds with the rains and I like winds when they are cool and moist. Like a breath of fresh air.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Me too :-).