Saturday, December 31, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 087: Meek.


The sun is aglow.
Its raining in my split heart.
Drenching my Meek soul.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.

11 comments:

Beach Bum said...

I hate those types of days.

Great writing!

Magsx2 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
The sun is doing it's best where I am, but they are predicting rain for later today, I hope not I have a barbie to go to. :)

I wish you all the best for the New Year.

The Elephant's Child said...

I hope your split heart heals and sends the rain somewhere it is more needed.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day BEACH BUM: Me too. Happy New Year :-).

G' Day MAGS: Enjoy your barbie and Happy New Year :-).

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Its been split too many times and is beyond healing. Happy New Year :-).

River said...

"split too many times and beyond healing" Hearts are never beyond healing. Try some duct tape - MacGyver style - ha ha.

This is a sad little Haiku.
I wish I could find the pages of Haikus my son wrote in high school, his English teacher was quite impressed.

Dave King said...

Superb.

Ygraine said...

Aah! That is so heart-wrenching.
Hugs are in order here, I think!!

FruitCake said...

Windsmoke, if your heart really is beyond healing, my wish for you in two oh one two is that it does not split one micron further.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RIVER: I don't even think super glue will work. Happy New Year :-).

G' Day DAVE: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated. Happy New Year :-).

G' Day YGRAINE: A hug will help the healing process. Happy New Year :-).

G' Day FRUIT: I don't think my heart will split any further this year. Happy New Year :-).

Bananazą®‡ said...

Happy New Year 2012

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day BANANAZ: Ditto :-).