Saturday, January 14, 2012

Fair Dinkum Haiku 092: Loiter.


Demons of the night.
Loiter around your bedroom.
Howling for your soul.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

15 comments:

Magsx2 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
This would of been a good one to put in yesterday for Friday the
13th. The very first thing I thought of was Werewolves. LOL.

Beach Bum said...

Wow! I've felt that way many times in my younger days. A bottle of tequila was usually the instigator.

The Elephant's Child said...

Nasty, nasty, nasty. And true some nights. Thanks Windsmoke.

Life Ramblings said...

very eerie and thought provoking.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day MAGS: It would have fitted in nicely yesterday :-).

G' Day BEACH: Alcohol does strange things to people :-).

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Absolutely scary if you ask me :-).

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Its the stuff of nightmares :-).

River said...

They can loiter as much as they like, they're not getting in here.

Cloudia said...

deep

scary




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Red Nomad OZ said...

Have you been watching horror movies again?!?!

Great and powerful imagery! Have a good rest-or-weekend if you dare ...

Dave King said...

This gives a whole new meaning to the phrase "Haiku moment".

Ygraine said...

Do you REALLY want to make me afraid to go to bed tonight?
Wow! Powerfully evocative.....

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RIVER: They're already in your bedroom staring down at you :-).

G' Day CLOUDIA: Absolutely :-).

G' Day RED: I'll be resting in front of the tv watching another horror movie :-).

G' Day DAVE: Haiku moment, i like that :-).

G' Day YGRAINE: Hope you have a good nights sleep :-).

Friko said...

No No, please take them away. They scare me!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day FRIKO: The only time they'll go away is when they have your soul :-).

malcfifty said...

Sounds a bit Stephen King-ish, Windsmoke, or is M. Night Shyamalan closer to the mark? Are you a fan of either?

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day MAL: M. Night Shyamalan is the best out of the two :-).