Humour, Poems and Yarns from the Pen of a Complete Novice.
Saturday, March 17, 2012
Black.
Black as the raven who took flight into the Black night. Black as the Blackest Black hole in outer space. Black as the rook Black is old hitler worlds shiftiest crook.
Hi Windsmoke, A Dark one this week, goes well with the weather we are having at the moment, it is very dark outside and it's only 4.30, it is pouring here in Brisbane.
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Very dark indeed.
Ha! Hitler would not approve - I like it!
Hi Windsmoke,
A Dark one this week, goes well with the weather we are having at the moment, it is very dark outside and it's only 4.30, it is pouring here in Brisbane.
I worried for a minute, thinking you were describing your own current mood, then I read the last two lines and breathed a sigh of relief.
Nicely done!
Gosh you're pretty versatile Windsmoke! He certainly was one of the 'blackest'.
G' Day CLOUDIA: Thank you :-).
G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Definitely :-).
G' Day FRUIT CAKE: Main thing is you liked it :-).
G' Day MAGS: We had sunshine and a light cool breeze just the way i like it :-).
G' Day RIVER: Yep, i'm fine no black moods for me :-).
G' Day BEACH: Thanks for saying so :-).
G' Day PERTH: Never thought of myself as versatile i just get on with it :-).
That's smacking it to 'em - esp. old hitler! Love it!
Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds hey Windsmoke, is the music where you get some of your inspiration for your poetry?
G' Day DAVE: I reckon a lot of people would have given him more than a smack after all the heartache he caused around the world :-).
G' Day PERTH: I find inspiration any where i can including music :-).
Next to RED, Black is my favourite colour (although lots tell me it's not a colour) - so wasn't sure what to expect from your title!
FAB poem - but sadly there are quite a number of names I could think of to rotate through the 'hitler' spot!
G' Day RED: I also could call him more nasty names to but they would be XXX-Rated :-).
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