Saturday, March 17, 2012

Black.

Black as the raven
who took flight
into the Black night.
Black as the Blackest
Black hole in outer space.
Black as the rook
Black is old hitler
worlds shiftiest crook.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

13 comments:

Cloudia said...

I like your stuff



Aloha from Waikiki
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The Elephant's Child said...

Very dark indeed.

FruitCake said...

Ha! Hitler would not approve - I like it!

Magsx2 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
A Dark one this week, goes well with the weather we are having at the moment, it is very dark outside and it's only 4.30, it is pouring here in Brisbane.

River said...

I worried for a minute, thinking you were describing your own current mood, then I read the last two lines and breathed a sigh of relief.

Beach Bum said...

Nicely done!

PerthDailyPhoto said...

Gosh you're pretty versatile Windsmoke! He certainly was one of the 'blackest'.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day CLOUDIA: Thank you :-).

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Definitely :-).

G' Day FRUIT CAKE: Main thing is you liked it :-).

G' Day MAGS: We had sunshine and a light cool breeze just the way i like it :-).

G' Day RIVER: Yep, i'm fine no black moods for me :-).

G' Day BEACH: Thanks for saying so :-).

G' Day PERTH: Never thought of myself as versatile i just get on with it :-).

Dave King said...

That's smacking it to 'em - esp. old hitler! Love it!

PerthDailyPhoto said...

Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds hey Windsmoke, is the music where you get some of your inspiration for your poetry?

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day DAVE: I reckon a lot of people would have given him more than a smack after all the heartache he caused around the world :-).

G' Day PERTH: I find inspiration any where i can including music :-).

Red Nomad OZ said...

Next to RED, Black is my favourite colour (although lots tell me it's not a colour) - so wasn't sure what to expect from your title!

FAB poem - but sadly there are quite a number of names I could think of to rotate through the 'hitler' spot!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RED: I also could call him more nasty names to but they would be XXX-Rated :-).