Thursday, March 29, 2012

Fair Dinkum Haiku 0104: Brewing.


Thunderstorms Brewing.
Raven clouds on the vista.
Lightning scintillates.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

15 comments:

Beach Bum said...

Could use a thunderstorm here right now.

Joanne said...

That's what they look like, coming on.

Elisabeth said...

The idea of lightning that scintillates made me think twice, but isn't that what the best haiku do: make you think and more importantly feel. Thanks, Windsmoke.

magsx2 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
A Great Haiku.
We actually had blue skies here today, so things are finally starting to dry out. :)

River said...

I love thunderstorms brewing on the horizon, coming closer, smelling the ozone in the air, the rumble of thunder, flash of lightning, those first fat raindrops and the smell of them as they hit the dry earth. Nature at her best. Or worst, depending on your outlook.

Dave King said...

I'm with Beach Bum! Where are they all?

PerthDailyPhoto said...

Wonderful words Windsmoke, love it when the image is clear.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day BEACH: I'll send one over special delivery right to your house :-).

G' Day JOANNE: Glad you got the right image :-).

G' Day ELISABETH: When the right image forms in your mind the rest just fall into place :-).

G' Day MAGS: That maybe short lived with winter just around the corner :-).

G' Day RIVER: I to like thunderstorm especially after a muggy day :-).

G' Day DAVE: I'll send one over to you as well :-).

G' Day PERTH: Its Bonza when a clear image forms in your mind :-).

icyhighs said...

I could totally feel that. Scintillates, indeed.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day ICY: I'm glad you got the right feeling :-).

LifeRamblings said...

beautiful words but i'm so afraid of thunderstorms bcoz they're loud and scary.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: I agree thunderstorms can be loud, scary and frightening at times :-).

Red Nomad OZ said...

Was in one just the other day! Actually, the day you wrote this!! Spooky ...

Ygraine said...

Aah, a neon light of the skies!
I love thunder :)

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RED: That is a coincidence :-).

G' Day YGRAINE: A neon light, that's a good description of lightning i like it :-).