Saturday, November 26, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 077: Kiss.


Meek waves Kiss sheer cliffs.
Wears away the rocky shore.
Ebbs into the sea.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.

9 comments:

The Elephant's Child said...

Sneaky those waves are. You think they are being gentle till bits of you fall away.
Thanks Windsmoke.

Tariq Mian said...

What a capture--!
natural wear and tear reaching final destination where it belongs.

Nothing is constant but change.
Everything is all set/programmed by the Nature from the start to the very end.
Good jap style poetry.
Loved it-----------

Friko said...

meek waves dismantling the cliffs.
Of course, it is the meek who inherit the earth.

I liked your previous story.

FruitCake said...

A gently soothing picture. :)

Cloudia said...

and the meek inherit . .



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Windsmoke. said...

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: The waves do give a false sense of security sometimes :-).

G' Day TARIQ: I reckon everything that happens on this planet is predestined by mother nature :-).

G' Day FRIKO: The meek will inherit the earth after the violent ones have laid it in ruin. I'm glad you enjoyed my previous post, thank you :-).

G' Day FRUIT: Until a cyclone hits :-).

G' Day CLOUDIA: ... the universe :-).

Dave King said...

This is one of your best, I think. No, definitely! Excellent work.

Beach Bum said...

That's a place I'd like to be right now. I would love to be hearing the sound of the ocean.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day DAVE: That's good to know because it tells me i'm still on the right track :-).

G' Day BEACH BUM: Hearing the sound of the ocean is both relaxing and hypnotic :-).