Saturday, September 29, 2012

True Blue Haiku: Glacial.

Broad river runs deep
Adam's ale Glacial as ice
Born from mountain snow.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

11 comments:

Andrew said...

I really like this one.

The Elephant's Child said...

I can feel the chill from here. Enough to make my fillings hurt. Thank you.

River said...

I love this one.
Fresh icy cold water, flowing freely.

Beach Bum said...

Makes me thirsty.

Great job with the imagery.

Red Nomad OZ said...

HHHMMMmmm... Almost TOO realistic for such a cold day!! That actually means it's really good ...

Ygraine said...

The icy cold is tangible, even here on the other side of the World!
Reminds me that winter's just around the corner :)

FruitCake said...

A nice one, Windsmoke.

Lynn Proctor said...

this reminds me of john denver's writings!!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day ANDREW, RIVER, RED & FRUIT CAKE: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated.

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Ouch!!.

G' Day BEACH BUM: Cheers!!.

G' Day YGRAINE: Its spring time here but still chilly.

G' Day LYNN: Even though i'm not a fan of John Denvers music it was a sad loss when he passed away.

LifeRamblings said...

great choice of words. two thumbs up for a lovely haiku.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated.