Humour, Poems and Yarns from the Pen of a Complete Novice.
I really like this one.
I can feel the chill from here. Enough to make my fillings hurt. Thank you.
I love this one. Fresh icy cold water, flowing freely.
Makes me thirsty.Great job with the imagery.
HHHMMMmmm... Almost TOO realistic for such a cold day!! That actually means it's really good ...
The icy cold is tangible, even here on the other side of the World!Reminds me that winter's just around the corner :)
A nice one, Windsmoke.
this reminds me of john denver's writings!!
G' Day ANDREW, RIVER, RED & FRUIT CAKE: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated.G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Ouch!!.G' Day BEACH BUM: Cheers!!.G' Day YGRAINE: Its spring time here but still chilly.G' Day LYNN: Even though i'm not a fan of John Denvers music it was a sad loss when he passed away.
great choice of words. two thumbs up for a lovely haiku.
G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated.
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