Humour, Poems and Yarns from the Pen of a Complete Novice.
I really like this one.
I can feel the chill from here. Enough to make my fillings hurt. Thank you.
I love this one. Fresh icy cold water, flowing freely.
Makes me thirsty.Great job with the imagery.
HHHMMMmmm... Almost TOO realistic for such a cold day!! That actually means it's really good ...
The icy cold is tangible, even here on the other side of the World!Reminds me that winter's just around the corner :)
A nice one, Windsmoke.
this reminds me of john denver's writings!!
G' Day ANDREW, RIVER, RED & FRUIT CAKE: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated.G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Ouch!!.G' Day BEACH BUM: Cheers!!.G' Day YGRAINE: Its spring time here but still chilly.G' Day LYNN: Even though i'm not a fan of John Denvers music it was a sad loss when he passed away.
great choice of words. two thumbs up for a lovely haiku.
G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated.
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I really like this one.
I can feel the chill from here. Enough to make my fillings hurt. Thank you.
I love this one.
Fresh icy cold water, flowing freely.
Makes me thirsty.
Great job with the imagery.
HHHMMMmmm... Almost TOO realistic for such a cold day!! That actually means it's really good ...
The icy cold is tangible, even here on the other side of the World!
Reminds me that winter's just around the corner :)
A nice one, Windsmoke.
this reminds me of john denver's writings!!
G' Day ANDREW, RIVER, RED & FRUIT CAKE: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated.
G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: Ouch!!.
G' Day BEACH BUM: Cheers!!.
G' Day YGRAINE: Its spring time here but still chilly.
G' Day LYNN: Even though i'm not a fan of John Denvers music it was a sad loss when he passed away.
great choice of words. two thumbs up for a lovely haiku.
G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thanks for saying so its much appreciated.
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