Saturday, December 08, 2012

True Blue Haiku: Wine.

Dark musty cellar
Ancient bottles of red Wine
Kip on robust racks.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

17 comments:

Lynn Proctor said...

this is pretty :)

FruitCake said...

Well done Windsmoke - as usual. I love it - and am beginning to think a volume of your Haiku would be perfect for a long train trip when a very wordy book just sends me to sleep. A couple of evocative lines, and something to think upon.

Joanne Noragon said...

I especially like the napping image, a little rest before they go off to the table. Or out on a picnic. Or on the porch some late afternoon. Or...

Cloudia said...

very nice word painting - mind the cobwebs.


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The Elephant's Child said...

Wine o'clock is nearly here. Thanks Windsmoke - I loved this.

River said...

Dark and musty cellar. Just as it should be.

Beach Bum said...

You got me ready to pull the cork on a bottle right now.

PerthDailyPhoto said...

I'm getting a clear image Windsmoke, very nice work indeed.

ANITA said...

Love it!!psst..are you going to have some wine??mm..happy saturday to you Dear !))

Ygraine said...

I can almost smell the mustiness of the cellar, and how I long to taste that delicious red wine!
Incredibly evocative piece, Windsmoke. Well done :)

Red Nomad OZ said...

'Kip' is such a great word - but it would never have occurred to me to apply it to wine! It fits perfectly!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LYNN: Thanks for saying so.

G' Day FRUIT CAKE: I'm not sure if i've written enough to fill a volume.

G' Day JOANNE: Or... a wedding Or...a BBQ.

G' Day CLOUDIA: Pesky things those cobwebs in the dark.

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD, BEACH BUM & ANITA: Cheers.

G' Day RIVER: Absolutely.

G' Day GRACE: I'm glad you got the right clear image.

G' Day YGRAINE: Go on be a devil and have a glass of red wine, cheers.

G' Day RED: Its only a small three letter word but it speaks volumes.

Annmarie Pipa said...

I'll drink to this post!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day ANNMARIE: Cheers.

Beach Bum said...

This makes me want to start pulling corks out of bottles and drink. Great stuff!

LifeRamblings said...

i love red wine. a toast to you and your readers.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day BEACH BUM & LIFE RAMBLINGS: Cheers.