Humour, Poems and Yarns from the Pen of a Complete Novice.
this is pretty :)
Well done Windsmoke - as usual. I love it - and am beginning to think a volume of your Haiku would be perfect for a long train trip when a very wordy book just sends me to sleep. A couple of evocative lines, and something to think upon.
I especially like the napping image, a little rest before they go off to the table. Or out on a picnic. Or on the porch some late afternoon. Or...
very nice word painting - mind the cobwebs.Aloha to YOU from WaikikiComfort Spiral ~ > < } } ( ° >> < 3 3 3 ( ' > ><}}(°> ~
Wine o'clock is nearly here. Thanks Windsmoke - I loved this.
Dark and musty cellar. Just as it should be.
You got me ready to pull the cork on a bottle right now.
I'm getting a clear image Windsmoke, very nice work indeed.
Love it!!psst..are you going to have some wine??mm..happy saturday to you Dear !))
I can almost smell the mustiness of the cellar, and how I long to taste that delicious red wine!Incredibly evocative piece, Windsmoke. Well done :)
'Kip' is such a great word - but it would never have occurred to me to apply it to wine! It fits perfectly!
G' Day LYNN: Thanks for saying so.G' Day FRUIT CAKE: I'm not sure if i've written enough to fill a volume.G' Day JOANNE: Or... a wedding Or...a BBQ.G' Day CLOUDIA: Pesky things those cobwebs in the dark.G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD, BEACH BUM & ANITA: Cheers.G' Day RIVER: Absolutely.G' Day GRACE: I'm glad you got the right clear image.G' Day YGRAINE: Go on be a devil and have a glass of red wine, cheers. G' Day RED: Its only a small three letter word but it speaks volumes.
I'll drink to this post!
G' Day ANNMARIE: Cheers.
This makes me want to start pulling corks out of bottles and drink. Great stuff!
i love red wine. a toast to you and your readers.
G' Day BEACH BUM & LIFE RAMBLINGS: Cheers.
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