Wednesday, March 02, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 017: Blisters.


Timber deck alight.
Boy stood crying in bare feet.
Hot painful Blisters.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.

5 comments:

Beach Bum said...

Nice imagery, calls to mind many sad and scary situations.

Dave King said...

Superb.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day BEACH BUM, Fire is especially scary if you're in the middle of a bushfire like the ones we have in OZ :-).

G' Day DAVE KING, Your generous comment is much appreciated and valued :-).

Life Ramblings said...

blisters are dreadful. i love to wear high heels, but my feet can't handle the dreaded blisters. :(

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS, Flat shoes are always best especially when walking long distances :-).