Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 032: Sunlight.

Higher than my head.
The long black cloud creeps along.
Blotting out the bright Sunlight.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.


Mags118 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
Very apt indeed, from what I read in the papers this morning it is teaming down in NSW, and there is more flooding expected, so plenty of blotted out sun for a lot of people today.

Beach Bum said...

Great piece, could use some of that rain up here.

The Elephant's Child said...

Love it. As always. Thanks.

Cloudia said...

But not for long, dear!

Aloha from Waikiki :)

Comfort Spiral




River said...

Bright bright sunshine.
Black black clouds.
Very moody.
This shall pass.

Dave King said...

A fine haiku. It has all the elements.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day MAGS118: Same is happening down here in Melbourne without the rain though :-).

G' Day BEACH BUM: Be careful what you ask for we asked for rain and got flooded out big time :-).

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: You're welcome :-).

G' Day CLOUDIA: Being winter the sun isn't blotted out for too long it usually comes out in the afternoon in all its glory :-).

G' Day RIVER: I've jotted down these words and will turn them into a Haiku further on down the track :-).

G' Day DAVE KING: Thank you for your encouragement and feedback, its good to know i'm on the right track :-).

Life Ramblings said...

a beautiful haiku, very well presented.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thank you for your most generous comment :-).

Red Nomad OZ said...

So appropriate as I suffered through rain in the outback earlier last week ... too easy to forget that it'll pass sooner or later.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RED NOMAD OZ: Hopefully the sun will shine on you later and brighten up your day :-).