Humour, Poems and Yarns from the Pen of a Complete Novice.
Hi Windsmoke,Very apt indeed, from what I read in the papers this morning it is teaming down in NSW, and there is more flooding expected, so plenty of blotted out sun for a lot of people today.
Great piece, could use some of that rain up here.
Love it. As always. Thanks.
But not for long, dear!Aloha from Waikiki :)Comfort Spiral><}}(°> ><}}(°><°)}}><
Bright bright sunshine.Black black clouds.Very moody. This shall pass.
A fine haiku. It has all the elements.
G' Day MAGS118: Same is happening down here in Melbourne without the rain though :-).G' Day BEACH BUM: Be careful what you ask for we asked for rain and got flooded out big time :-).G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: You're welcome :-).G' Day CLOUDIA: Being winter the sun isn't blotted out for too long it usually comes out in the afternoon in all its glory :-).G' Day RIVER: I've jotted down these words and will turn them into a Haiku further on down the track :-).G' Day DAVE KING: Thank you for your encouragement and feedback, its good to know i'm on the right track :-).
a beautiful haiku, very well presented.
G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thank you for your most generous comment :-).
So appropriate as I suffered through rain in the outback earlier last week ... too easy to forget that it'll pass sooner or later.
G' Day RED NOMAD OZ: Hopefully the sun will shine on you later and brighten up your day :-).
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Hi Windsmoke,
Very apt indeed, from what I read in the papers this morning it is teaming down in NSW, and there is more flooding expected, so plenty of blotted out sun for a lot of people today.
Great piece, could use some of that rain up here.
Love it. As always. Thanks.
But not for long, dear!
Aloha from Waikiki :)
Comfort Spiral
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Bright bright sunshine.
Black black clouds.
Very moody.
This shall pass.
A fine haiku. It has all the elements.
G' Day MAGS118: Same is happening down here in Melbourne without the rain though :-).
G' Day BEACH BUM: Be careful what you ask for we asked for rain and got flooded out big time :-).
G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: You're welcome :-).
G' Day CLOUDIA: Being winter the sun isn't blotted out for too long it usually comes out in the afternoon in all its glory :-).
G' Day RIVER: I've jotted down these words and will turn them into a Haiku further on down the track :-).
G' Day DAVE KING: Thank you for your encouragement and feedback, its good to know i'm on the right track :-).
a beautiful haiku, very well presented.
G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thank you for your most generous comment :-).
So appropriate as I suffered through rain in the outback earlier last week ... too easy to forget that it'll pass sooner or later.
G' Day RED NOMAD OZ: Hopefully the sun will shine on you later and brighten up your day :-).
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