Wednesday, June 01, 2011

Fair Dinkum Haiku 030: Fish.

In crystalline sea.
Along sandy white bottom.
Rainbow hued Fish swim.

(c) 2011 Windsmoke.

9 comments:

The Elephant's Child said...

Wonderful - lifted my day. Thanks.

Cloudia said...

simply wonderful!




Aloha from Honolulu

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Windsmoke. said...

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: I'm glad it lifted you up today makes it easier to hang in there for the small portion :-).

G' Day CLOUDIA: I hope it reminded you of the crystal clear sea around Hawaii :-).

River said...

Hmmm, something fishy here...

Beach Bum said...

Nicely done!

Dave King said...

Lovely. For me that ticks all the boxes.

Red Nomad OZ said...

You know it's a success when your readers get a clear and immediate mental image!! Or is that just me?!

Life Ramblings said...

you've written many beautiful haiku and this one is no exception.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day RIVER: Could be :-).

G' Day BEACH BUM: Thank you :-).

G' Day DAVE KING: Fantastic :-).

D' Day RED NOMAD OZ: If you get an immediate and clear image that's fantastic :-).

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thank you for your generous comment and i hope to write more beautiful Haiku in the future for you to enjoy :-).