Thursday, May 17, 2012

Fair Dinkum Haiku 0111: Depraved.


With my loveless heart.
Scared and alone in the dark.
I've Depraved myself.

(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

17 comments:

magsx2 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
A sad haiku today, but nicely written. :)

River said...

Loveless heart, scared and alone...
that's very sad.

Beach Bum said...

I could the loneliness. Great job!

The Elephant's Child said...

Very sad indeed (but I do not want to hear how you have depraved yourself).

jane.healy said...

Depraved?

Dave King said...

Yow, remarkable poem.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day MAGS, RIVER: Absolutely :-).

G' Day BEACH: I reckon loneliness isn't as bad as people make it out to be :-).

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD & JANE: The Haiku speaks for itself :-).

G' Day DAVE: Thanks for the vote of confidence its much appreciated :-).

Annmarie Pipa said...

look for the light.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day ANNMARIE: There is a light but its very tiny at the moment :-).

PerthDailyPhoto said...

Don't be sad Windsmoke.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day GRACE: I blame the weather we've been having lately :-).

Friko said...

You've depraved yourself? I'm not with you, sorry.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day FRIKO: The Haiku speaks for itself :-).

Ygraine said...

So,
Perhaps it's best to just open your heart to love and hope it stays intact.
(Easier said than done in my experience though!)

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day YGRAINE: I agree it is easier said than done :-).

LifeRamblings said...

life can be tough these days.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Absolutely :-).