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Hi Windsmoke,A sad haiku today, but nicely written. :)
Loveless heart, scared and alone...that's very sad.
I could the loneliness. Great job!
Very sad indeed (but I do not want to hear how you have depraved yourself).
Depraved?
Yow, remarkable poem.
G' Day MAGS, RIVER: Absolutely :-).G' Day BEACH: I reckon loneliness isn't as bad as people make it out to be :-).G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD & JANE: The Haiku speaks for itself :-).G' Day DAVE: Thanks for the vote of confidence its much appreciated :-).
look for the light.
G' Day ANNMARIE: There is a light but its very tiny at the moment :-).
Don't be sad Windsmoke.
G' Day GRACE: I blame the weather we've been having lately :-).
You've depraved yourself? I'm not with you, sorry.
G' Day FRIKO: The Haiku speaks for itself :-).
So,Perhaps it's best to just open your heart to love and hope it stays intact.(Easier said than done in my experience though!)
G' Day YGRAINE: I agree it is easier said than done :-).
life can be tough these days.
G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Absolutely :-).
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Hi Windsmoke,
A sad haiku today, but nicely written. :)
Loveless heart, scared and alone...
that's very sad.
I could the loneliness. Great job!
Very sad indeed (but I do not want to hear how you have depraved yourself).
Depraved?
Yow, remarkable poem.
G' Day MAGS, RIVER: Absolutely :-).
G' Day BEACH: I reckon loneliness isn't as bad as people make it out to be :-).
G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD & JANE: The Haiku speaks for itself :-).
G' Day DAVE: Thanks for the vote of confidence its much appreciated :-).
look for the light.
G' Day ANNMARIE: There is a light but its very tiny at the moment :-).
Don't be sad Windsmoke.
G' Day GRACE: I blame the weather we've been having lately :-).
You've depraved yourself? I'm not with you, sorry.
G' Day FRIKO: The Haiku speaks for itself :-).
So,
Perhaps it's best to just open your heart to love and hope it stays intact.
(Easier said than done in my experience though!)
G' Day YGRAINE: I agree it is easier said than done :-).
life can be tough these days.
G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Absolutely :-).
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