Thursday, May 24, 2012

Fair Dinkum Haiku 0112: Beginning.


In the Beginning.
In a world devoid of light.
There was only night.


I'll be resting Fair Dinkum Haiku for now.
Instead join me next Thursday Morning for Perched On The Dunny Pondering, see ya then.
(c) 2012 Windsmoke.

14 comments:

magsx2 said...

Hi Windsmoke,
A very deep haiku, very well written, I love it.

Annmarie Pipa said...

glad there is light now...

malcfifty said...

You certainly have a gift for words, Windsmoke. Your Haiku sets an eerie scene, but with the expectation that something is about to happen to change the nothingness. (After all, it is the "beginning".)

The Elephant's Child said...

Thanks Windsmoke. I will miss your haikus and hope that at some stage they will return. In the meantime I am looking forward to your profound ponderings.

Beach Bum said...

Good stuff!

Dave King said...

That must have been when I was very small. I can just remember it.

PerthDailyPhoto said...

That's a pretty 'deep' ending Windsmoke, looking forward to some classic 'dunny' tales!!

Friko said...

For a last offering this is a great one.

Ygraine said...

Hmm, eternal night.
I guess it could have it's advantages.
At least vampires would be happy!!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day MAGS & BEACH: I'm glad you thought so :-).

G' Day ANNMARIE: Me Too :-).

G' Day MAL: Exactly! :-).

G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD & FRIKO: Fair Dinkum Haiku will return in the future :-).

G' Day DAVE: You must have a long memory indeed :-).

G' Day GRACE: I wouldn't say classic dunny tales but they'll certainly rattle ya brainbox big time :-).

G' Day YGRAINE: Vampires can have eternal night its certainly not for me :-).

FruitCake said...

The dunny man cometh!

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day FRUIT CAKE: Only three sleeps to go! :-).

LifeRamblings said...

you're such a brilliant writer.

Windsmoke. said...

G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: I'm humbled indeed, thank you :-).