Humour, Poems and Yarns from the Pen of a Complete Novice.
Wonderful - lifted my day. Thanks.
simply wonderful! Aloha from HonoluluComfort Spiral><}}(°> ><}}(°><°)}}><
G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: I'm glad it lifted you up today makes it easier to hang in there for the small portion :-).G' Day CLOUDIA: I hope it reminded you of the crystal clear sea around Hawaii :-).
Hmmm, something fishy here...
Nicely done!
Lovely. For me that ticks all the boxes.
You know it's a success when your readers get a clear and immediate mental image!! Or is that just me?!
you've written many beautiful haiku and this one is no exception.
G' Day RIVER: Could be :-).G' Day BEACH BUM: Thank you :-).G' Day DAVE KING: Fantastic :-).D' Day RED NOMAD OZ: If you get an immediate and clear image that's fantastic :-).G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thank you for your generous comment and i hope to write more beautiful Haiku in the future for you to enjoy :-).
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Wonderful - lifted my day. Thanks.
simply wonderful!
Aloha from Honolulu
Comfort Spiral
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G' Day THE ELEPHANTS CHILD: I'm glad it lifted you up today makes it easier to hang in there for the small portion :-).
G' Day CLOUDIA: I hope it reminded you of the crystal clear sea around Hawaii :-).
Hmmm, something fishy here...
Nicely done!
Lovely. For me that ticks all the boxes.
You know it's a success when your readers get a clear and immediate mental image!! Or is that just me?!
you've written many beautiful haiku and this one is no exception.
G' Day RIVER: Could be :-).
G' Day BEACH BUM: Thank you :-).
G' Day DAVE KING: Fantastic :-).
D' Day RED NOMAD OZ: If you get an immediate and clear image that's fantastic :-).
G' Day LIFE RAMBLINGS: Thank you for your generous comment and i hope to write more beautiful Haiku in the future for you to enjoy :-).
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